感谢及请求电子邮件英文范文

o:  Professor Greenberg
From:  Weili Ye
Date:  XXXXXX
Subject: Journal Article

Dear Professor Greenberg,
尊敬的Greenberg教授：

I want to thank you very much for the valuable data you provided me on the various 401K1 plans being offered by the State Governments2 of Illinois, Indiana and Michigan. I would never have completed the attached paper without your support and frequent feedback.  Would you be so kind as to write a foreword3 for me and return with any additional comments and suggestions on the paper itself?  I am targeting4 December 13 for the submission to the Human Capital Journal review committee.
非常感谢您提供的有关伊利诺斯州、印地安那州和密歇根州州政府提供的各种各样的401K计划数据。如果没有您的支持和经常性反馈，我永远也不可能完成以下所附的这篇论文。能否麻烦您为我写篇序言，并给论文做些评论和修改建议，然后寄还给我？我打算于12月13日把它提交给《人力资本杂志》评论委员会。

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这是一位学生写email感谢教授为她搜集参考资料并请教授为她的文章写一个序言。写信人附上的Attachment即她本人撰写的文稿。

1.   401K  美国许多公司给员工提供的退休计划。通常做法是员工从工资中拿出一部分存入401K, 同时公司也出一部分钱。Usually employees deduct money from their paychecks and deposit the money in 401K; some companies will contribute a certain percentage amount to the individual employee's account.

2.   State governments:  State Government  并不是 U.S. government （联邦政府）而是代表美国各州的政府。 It refers to the government representing one of the 50 states in the U.S.

3.   foreword: 前言、序 preface.

4.   target (v): 以什么（日期、东西、人）为目标 set December 13 as the date to submit the paper.